Crossbreeding science

Damn, I'm glad I found this one. I'm going to check out your stuff specifically on this site. You and Steve make a good pair based on what I've seen... Liked the mother/son wake up video too.

What I love about this one is fluid character movement, good graphics, great dialogue, nice story. Someone mentioned the mouth not moving, but I took this as all thoughts rather than attempted communication. Now that I go back, they do have a point. She does talk to the guards before the experiment. So, it's a minor thing you can work on. I prefer voice overlay to text on the screen... too distracting.

I'd have the guards ogling her on the video camera back in her lab. Adds voyeurism and exhibition to your piece.

The sci fi environment is fab. The lighting is acceptable and what you would anticipate. You could try changing it up a bit at different points in the video... go from blue to red to white as sort of an extra stimulus. I think the beast looks a little like Disney material. He needs to be more sinister. Also, if you're going to talk about breeding, I wouldn't mention the word radioactive as the scientist does when she first walks in the chamber. Those two things are incompatible.

Most scientists are not going to expose themselves like this to such a study, but I can accept it. Your protagonist is lush and alluring with a voluptuous body made for breeding. You just wonder if she really wants to go through all that when she could acquire a test subject.

Loved the cum all over her at the end. Her slow exit from the chamber was fab. The beast should be dripping. Things almost went too smoothly, to be honest. This is a monster chained to the wall and the two of them had a very compatible experience. It would be good to alert the viewer why the scientist has such deliberate control over this subject. I mean, if she does. Is so, why the chains?

Fantastic vid. It's in my fav list.

at the end de Male voice NOPE not g00d
overall really good

As one user already posted, the lighting is too dark. Since this is supposedly in a laboratory environment you'd need sufficient lighting in order to properly observe the experiment. Also the "test subject" - why was she put into the room still with her clothes on? Since this is supposed to be a "mating experiment" shouldn't she be naked from the get-go? The work is good, but there are some minor glitches such as when people are talking, their mouths don't move. At first I thought that was someone talking to the observers through an intercom or similar device until I realized, nope, it actually is the people inside the room "speaking". Maybe they were using telepathy? Anyway, still enjoyable. Thank you for posting!

More please

Awesome work

Beautiful work, I need this so bad

Welcome back and that's some quality work. I've mentioned it on another video of yours but I write scenarios and stories and put them on Ragnegs discord. He makes content in Skyrim but some stories might translate better with what you use. Feel free to check and use whatever at your leisure. Looking forward to what's next.

It's too bright. I almost could see it. You were trying for total darkness, right?

Very nice! More of this quality material!